Bug 233943 - Typos in the 12.0-RELEASE announcement page
Summary: Typos in the 12.0-RELEASE announcement page
Status: Closed FIXED
Alias: None
Product: Documentation
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Website (show other bugs)
Version: Latest
Hardware: Any Any
: --- Affects Only Me
Assignee: Guangyuan Yang
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Reported: 2018-12-11 21:04 UTC by Max Stucchi
Modified: 2018-12-11 22:09 UTC (History)
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Description Max Stucchi 2018-12-11 21:04:29 UTC 
I found some typos in the announcement page for 12.0-RELEASE.

Here is a quick patch to fix them:

Index: en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/12.0R/announce.xml
===================================================================
--- en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/12.0R/announce.xml	(revision 52672)
+++ en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/12.0R/announce.xml	(working copy)
@@ -94,7 +94,7 @@
 	  emulation.</p>
       </li>
       <li>
-	<p>The bhyve(8) utility is now able to be run withing
+	<p>The bhyve(8) utility is now able to be run within
 	  a jail(8).</p>
       </li>
       <li>
@@ -241,7 +241,7 @@
       <dt>memstick</dt>

       <dd>
-	<p>This can be written to an USB memory stick (flash drive)
+	<p>This can be written to a USB memory stick (flash drive)
 	  and used to do an install on machines capable of booting off
 	  USB drives.  It also supports booting into a "livefs" based
 	  rescue mode.  There are no pre-built packages.</p>
@@ -261,7 +261,7 @@
       <dt>mini-memstick</dt>

       <dd>
-	<p>This can be written to an USB memory stick (flash drive)
+	<p>This can be written to a USB memory stick (flash drive)
 	  and used to boot a machine, but does not contain the
 	  installation distribution sets on the medium itself, similar
 	  to the bootonly image.  It also supports booting into
Comment 1 commit-hook freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2018-12-11 22:08:42 UTC 
A commit references this bug:

Author: ygy
Date: Tue Dec 11 22:08:20 UTC 2018
New revision: 52673
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/52673

Log:
  Fix some typos in 12.0R announcement.

  PR:		233943
  Reported by:	Max Stucchi <max@stucchi.ch>
  Approved by:	gjb

Changes:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/htdocs/releases/12.0R/announce.xml