Bug 240656 - Section 5.8.1 of the FreeBSD Handbook
Summary: Section 5.8.1 of the FreeBSD Handbook
Status: Closed FIXED
Alias: None
Product: Documentation
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Website (show other bugs)
Version: Latest
Hardware: Any Any
: --- Affects Only Me
Assignee: Jason Helfman
URL: https://www.freebsd.org/doc/en_US.ISO...
Keywords:
Depends on:
Blocks:
 
Reported: 2019-09-18 02:24 UTC by Pau Amma
Modified: 2019-09-18 08:06 UTC (History)
2 users (show)

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Description Pau Amma 2019-09-18 02:24:10 UTC 
In the note at the end of that section, "the some versions of Xorg" should be "some versions of Xorg".
Comment 1 commit-hook freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2019-09-18 08:05:17 UTC 
A commit references this bug:

Author: bcr
Date: Wed Sep 18 08:05:03 UTC 2019
New revision: 53418
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/53418

Log:
  Fix wording which was wrong ("the some") and
  remove another superfluous word in the same
  sentence while here.  Put a sentence stop after
  the command to split this long sentence into two.

  PR:		    240656
  Submitted by:	    pauamma@gundo.com

Changes:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/x11/chapter.xml
Comment 2 Benedict Reuschling freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2019-09-18 08:06:24 UTC 
Thanks for submitting that. I fixed the sentence a bit more, split it in two and committed it. PR closed!