Bug 241438 - Small grammar edits in the Handbook's Introduction
Summary: Small grammar edits in the Handbook's Introduction
Status: Closed FIXED
Alias: None
Product: Documentation
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Documentation (show other bugs)
Version: Latest
Hardware: Any Any
: --- Affects Only Me
Assignee: Sergio Carlavilla Delgado
URL:
Keywords: patch
Depends on:
Blocks:
 
Reported: 2019-10-23 16:23 UTC by kamalimani1623
Modified: 2020-02-08 10:03 UTC (History)
1 user (show)

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Attachments
Diff file of the changes I made. (3.43 KB, patch)
2019-10-23 16:23 UTC, kamalimani1623
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Description kamalimani1623 2019-10-23 16:23:32 UTC
Created attachment 208532 [details]
Diff file of the changes I made.

Mostly did some very small grammar edits, a couple phrases were changed to reflect changes in other parts of the documentation or to clarify meaning. Most of these are just some nit-picks and some are largely subjective.
Comment 1 commit-hook freebsd_committer 2020-02-08 09:57:03 UTC
A commit references this bug:

Author: carlavilla
Date: Sat Feb  8 09:56:20 UTC 2020
New revision: 53882
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/53882

Log:
  Small grammar edits in the Handbook's Introduction

  PR:		241438
  Submitted by:	kamalimani1623@gmail.com
  Patch by:	kamalimani1623@gmail.com
  Approved by:	bcr@(mentor)
  Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D23550

Changes:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/introduction/chapter.xml
Comment 2 Sergio Carlavilla Delgado freebsd_committer 2020-02-08 10:03:25 UTC
Fixed. Thanks for the patch!