Bug 241674 - Spurious comma in FreeBSD Handbook section 11.5.2
Summary: Spurious comma in FreeBSD Handbook section 11.5.2
Status: Closed FIXED
Alias: None
Product: Documentation
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Books & Articles (show other bugs)
Version: Latest
Hardware: Any Any
: --- Affects Only Me
Assignee: Chris Rees
URL:
Keywords: patch
Depends on:
Blocks:
 
Reported: 2019-11-02 16:45 UTC by Pau Amma
Modified: 2019-12-04 11:54 UTC (History)
1 user (show)

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Remove spurious comma and while I'm at it, simplify language a bit. Tested with lynx. (634 bytes, patch)
2019-11-02 16:45 UTC, Pau Amma 		no flags Details | Diff
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Description Pau Amma 2019-11-02 16:45:32 UTC 
Created attachment 208801 [details]
Remove spurious comma and while I'm at it, simplify language a bit. Tested with lynx.
Comment 1 Chris Rees freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2019-12-04 11:53:27 UTC 
Committed, thanks!
Comment 2 commit-hook freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2019-12-04 11:54:07 UTC 
A commit references this bug:

Author: crees
Date: Wed Dec  4 11:53:13 UTC 2019
New revision: 53655
URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/53655

Log:
  Simplify language by removing spurious comma.

  While here, "must" conjugates with plural as well as singular.

  PR:			docs/241674
  Submitted by:		PauAmma <pauamma@gundo.com>
  Reviewed by:		bcr (first point)
  Differential Revision:	https://reviews.freebsd.org/D22648

Changes:
  head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/handbook/config/chapter.xml