Bug 273460 - Update: website/content/ru/about.adoc
Summary: Update: website/content/ru/about.adoc
Status: New
Alias: None
Product: Documentation
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Website (show other bugs)
Version: Latest
Hardware: Any Any
: --- Affects Some People
Assignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody)
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Reported: 2023-08-30 20:39 UTC by Andrei Zakhvatov
Modified: 2023-09-01 02:23 UTC (History)
2 users (show)

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diff to the version of 19.06.2023 (12.46 KB, patch)
2023-08-30 20:39 UTC, Andrei Zakhvatov 		no flags Details | Diff
The diff with changes according to Maxim's suggestions (12.43 KB, patch)
2023-08-31 19:41 UTC, Andrei Zakhvatov 		no flags Details | Diff
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Description Andrei Zakhvatov 2023-08-30 20:39:49 UTC 
Created attachment 244490 [details]
diff to the version of 19.06.2023

Dear colleagues,

  Please find attached the patch to update current Russian translation of website/content/ru/about.adoc to the latest EN revision (8e22e76d94dc5fef83abcb3c082ab4242ef90ba2 of 19.06.2021).
Comment 1 Maxim Konovalov freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2023-08-31 04:39:31 UTC 
Hi Andrei,

The following section sounds weird to me:

"Лицензирование открытого исходного кода по схеме Беркли позволяет им самим определять <...>"

Specifically, there is not such thing as "схема Беркли".

I would keep the previous version instead.

Otherwise it looks ok.

Maxim
Comment 2 Andrei Zakhvatov 2023-08-31 19:41:21 UTC 
Created attachment 244534 [details]
The diff with changes according to Maxim's suggestions

Maxim,

  I agree. The diff with corrected translation is attached.

P.S. I think that "BSD License" ("Лицензия BSD") instead of "Berkeley license" could be more accurate in the original text.
Comment 3 Maxim Konovalov freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2023-09-01 02:23:41 UTC 
Hi Andrei,

Same here, I like "BSD License" ("Лицензия BSD") more too.

Apart from that, there are several places where you put three white spaces instead of two. 

Otherwise, looks good.

Thanks,

Maxim