Bug 274778 - Documentation: Improve readability of bhyve quick CPU compatibility check
Summary: Documentation: Improve readability of bhyve quick CPU compatibility check
Status: Open
Alias: None
Product: Documentation
Classification: Unclassified
Component: Books & Articles (show other bugs)
Version: Latest
Hardware: Any Any
: --- Affects Only Me
Assignee: freebsd-doc (Nobody)
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Keywords:
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Reported: 2023-10-28 23:34 UTC by gaelanlloyd
Modified: 2023-11-03 14:45 UTC (History)
2 users (show)

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Git patch with changes (1.75 KB, patch)
2023-10-28 23:34 UTC, gaelanlloyd 		no flags Details | Diff
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Description gaelanlloyd 2023-10-28 23:34:20 UTC 
Created attachment 245957 [details]
Git patch with changes

Some changes to help make this section easier to read:

* Split out AMD/Intel flags into a bulleted list.
* Restructure word order to improve readability.
Comment 1 Li-Wen Hsu freebsd_committer freebsd_triage 2023-11-03 07:35:01 UTC 
Thanks for the patch. This looks good.

Just one check before commit and push: what's your preferred author line in the commit?  In the patch you have:

  gaelanlloyd <gaelan fastmail.fm>

and in this ticket you have:

  Gaelan Lloyd <gaelan fastmail.fm>

(The '@' will be restored when commit)
Comment 2 gaelanlloyd 2023-11-03 14:45:55 UTC 
(In reply to Li-Wen Hsu from comment #1)
Good catch. There's a difference between my GitHub username and my name on here. Let's use the first one (gaelanlloyd). Thanks for checking in with me!