Created attachment 266317 [details] patch file Fix a small typo in camcontrol/camcontrol.8
Hi Chris, Thank for the patch. However, it still sounds strange (I am a non-native speaker, bear with me). Should it be simple like that instead: "This command can be used on an SSD drive to restore it to factory default write performance" Thank, Maxim
Thank you for reporting this. It should actually be even simpler, EXAMPLES takes the imperative tone. It needs to say "Restore a solid state drive (SSD) to factory performance:". I will commit this fix today.
No longer my original work
A commit in branch main references this bug: URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/src/commit/?id=fbc321b9cdceecd3c97742868da5d500423cf484 commit fbc321b9cdceecd3c97742868da5d500423cf484 Author: Alexander Ziaee <ziaee@FreeBSD.org> AuthorDate: 2025-12-23 13:36:49 +0000 Commit: Alexander Ziaee <ziaee@FreeBSD.org> CommitDate: 2025-12-23 13:40:29 +0000 camcontrol.8: Descriptions before examples This page has a lot of examples, so having them in the previous order can be confusing. Rewrite to the normal order where the descriptions come before the command, followed by a colon, which is still clear even jumping to the middle of the section. PR: 291759 MFC after: 3 days Reviewed by: imp Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D54285 sbin/camcontrol/camcontrol.8 | 349 ++++++++++++++++++------------------------- 1 file changed, 148 insertions(+), 201 deletions(-)
A commit in branch stable/15 references this bug: URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/src/commit/?id=baef11e8e9b327dbe634edc01fef332a59ba9790 commit baef11e8e9b327dbe634edc01fef332a59ba9790 Author: Alexander Ziaee <ziaee@FreeBSD.org> AuthorDate: 2025-12-23 13:36:49 +0000 Commit: Alexander Ziaee <ziaee@FreeBSD.org> CommitDate: 2026-01-01 18:05:05 +0000 camcontrol.8: Descriptions before examples This page has a lot of examples, so having them in the previous order can be confusing. Rewrite to the normal order where the descriptions come before the command, followed by a colon, which is still clear even jumping to the middle of the section. PR: 291759 MFC after: 3 days Reviewed by: imp Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D54285 (cherry picked from commit fbc321b9cdceecd3c97742868da5d500423cf484) sbin/camcontrol/camcontrol.8 | 349 ++++++++++++++++++------------------------- 1 file changed, 148 insertions(+), 201 deletions(-)
A commit in branch stable/14 references this bug: URL: https://cgit.FreeBSD.org/src/commit/?id=74c8530c214cbc6eb01af00f12aa1d204c65ab26 commit 74c8530c214cbc6eb01af00f12aa1d204c65ab26 Author: Alexander Ziaee <ziaee@FreeBSD.org> AuthorDate: 2025-12-23 13:36:49 +0000 Commit: Alexander Ziaee <ziaee@FreeBSD.org> CommitDate: 2026-01-01 19:05:58 +0000 camcontrol.8: Descriptions before examples This page has a lot of examples, so having them in the previous order can be confusing. Rewrite to the normal order where the descriptions come before the command, followed by a colon, which is still clear even jumping to the middle of the section. PR: 291759 MFC after: 3 days Reviewed by: imp Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D54285 (cherry picked from commit fbc321b9cdceecd3c97742868da5d500423cf484) sbin/camcontrol/camcontrol.8 | 349 ++++++++++++++++++------------------------- 1 file changed, 148 insertions(+), 201 deletions(-)