Created attachment 208988 [details] Style revisions, accessibility enhancements, and ports statistics updates throughout the book. Style revisions, accessibility enhancements, and ports statistics updates throughout the book. - Make pronouns truly gender-agnostic. - Correct typos and minor grammar errors. - Update number of ports vs. time graph to a less outdated version (from https://web.archive.org/web/20121223081637if_/http://www.freebsd.org/ports/growth/status.png). - Enhance screenreader friendliness of pictures. - Remove reference to deleted image. - Add link to FDP primer. Tested with lynx, but should ideally be tested by someone using a screenreader. Note 1: Images removed from the English version but still used by translations have been kept until the translations catch up. These images are: share/images/books/dev-model/hats-overview.png, share/images/books/dev-model/maintenance.png, share/images/books/dev-model/orghierarchy.png, share/images/books/dev-model/orghierarchy.sla, share/images/books/dev-model/orghierarchy2.png, and share/images/books/dev-model/proc-releng.png. Note 2: I think it's OK to include a local copy of https://web.archive.org/web/20121223081637if_/http://www.freebsd.org/ports/growth/status.png in the document, since that image came from the FreeBSD website originally. But IANAL, so take that opinion with appropriate amounts of salt. Note 3: I'm attaching the modified picture (share/images/books/dev-model/portsstatus.png) separately, because it doesn't look like uploading a svn diff will do the right thing with it.
Created attachment 208989 [details] share/images/books/dev-model/portsstatus.png
A commit references this bug: Author: bcr Date: Fri May 1 10:15:03 UTC 2020 New revision: 54087 URL: https://svnweb.freebsd.org/changeset/doc/54087 Log: A number of (much needed) updates and corrections to the dev-model book: - Make pronouns truly gender-agnostic - Correct typos and minor grammar errors - Update number of ports vs. time graph to a less outdated version (from [1]) - Enhance screenreader friendliness of pictures - Remove reference to deleted image - Add link to FDP primer Thanks to Pau Amma for working on a patch and submitting it to us. [1] https://web.archive.org/web/20121223081637if_/http://www.freebsd.org/ports/growth/status.png PR: 241814 Submitted by: pauamma_gundo.com Reviewed by: debdrub, bcr, allanjude Approved by: bcr Differential Revision: https://reviews.freebsd.org/D24321 Changes: head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/dev-model/Makefile head/en_US.ISO8859-1/books/dev-model/book.xml
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